Finally caught up on reading this story, and oh my goodness, I love it! There's so many beautiful words and sentences! Besides the lovely writing (which really is just such a pleasure to read) the story is fanatstic! I need to get Kal to read this. He likes these sort of stories too.
The beginning was the hardest for me because there were so many names, dates, and places. I've never been really good with that sort of thing, so I can't really be of any help with continuity like FFFFFplayer or Strider, but reading through it was definitely worth it as the story went on. I can't help but cheer for all the heroes. It was so tragic when Marion's attendant came to the camp!
I had honestly forgotten how much I liked reading this sort of writing style. Excellently done, Lolimon! I hope you write more/moar soon!