Haroldosaur wrote:
I write with news of PoA! Which story, though, is anyone's guess. :P But whatever. Here's some parts I find funny.
"Plue visibly flinched. Dante, who had taken to wearing a long coat, felt mildly offended. Gaia remained oblivious. Roseâs brow furrowed. Jacen, beginning to catch on to the gravity of the situation, stepped forward."
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"âWe wait. Still.â He deadpanned. âIn the five minutes between now and the last time you asked that question, Plue hasnât returned. There isnât a lot we can do.â"
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"ââEternal shotgunâ?â Echoed Dante, sounding decidedly dubious. âNo wonder he didnât let you sit up there. Eternal shotgun sounds like too much power for any one man to wield."
"Yeah, well, I'm a woman, thank you very much.""
Îssuming they are all from the same story then I say Destroyer of Worlds! If I recall correctly, you've said that Jacen will not be making an appearance in Savants and the only other PoA story you've started -assuming you've not started something more in secret, which is a safe assumption considering you're already swamped- is Mythran Trials (I sure hope I'm not forgetting something; I'd have to give the Talmeed a slap on the forehead), in which I don't believe all these characters would appear -at least so soon- and which is unlikely to have received any writing if we consider past events as indication for the future (or recent past, whose nature has not yet been revealed).
G, Le Moi. You could have stopped lines ago. Now this is just... what is this? :P