As for the drawings. They're not bad. I wonder if you could try for Shadow's notorious messy hair. Legend has it he managed to brush it once for his wedding, but didn't like it and messed them up again! :P Perhaps, you should try to draw the cleverness on his face on the next one. And it'd be nice to see other members of the FFFFF Team as well.
As for the dragon scene, if you were drawing the moment where the dragon breathes fire on Magical's shield while they're descending a stairway, then that's one big coincident. This is one of my favourite scenes to picture as an image. I do believe that was what I wanted for the book's cover, if ever I could get the image. If you made the dragon drawing, too, I wouldn't complain.
It's okay. Feel free to test. The more, the merrier. The better they are in the end, the merrier! :P
No, the scene is when Shadow and a few others are running down a hallway with a Dragon spitting lava at them. When I read it, I got that image in my head, and, dispite the peril, I wanted to laugh because the supposed looks on all their faces (in my head) were priceless. As for the scene you're describing, would you want the picture taken from behind Magical's head or behind the Dragon's head, or from somewhere else entirely? Like Shadow's POV? He's there, right?Â
Yeah, I thought you might be thinking of this. I don't need you to draw that scene. But since you asked, I imagined it from above. Maybe, bird's eye view is not good for games, but there's nothing wrong with viewing your stories' universe from above as if from the heavens! :P