Jonna Friesian wrote: About time I finished this. :P I few things I'd like to say:
The hair: Honestly this came out much better than I thought it would. :P I know it's not too good but this is as close as it's going to get. :P
The tear in the far sleeve: I wasn't sure whether the shirt would show through there, since it's described as a short sleeve shirt in Foes and Heirs, and considering the way the jacket was bunching up, I didn't think it would. If I made the wrong call let me know and I'll try to go back and change it. :P