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Sorry Wiz. Here's a comment with more words. File:Emotion-4.gif
I notice the writing style is a little different and also very refined, it flows like a stream, at a steady pace at least for now as opposed to fast in an action scene, and that is excellent - it's also independent and sneak peak is a good description of what you've written here, since I haven't the faintest idea where and when it takes place in the KotOS timeline, assuming it's a KotOS story at all - which it is of course, but it could very well take place in its own universe.