Well, Harold, you can't blame me for that!
- Harold enters*
"Well considering that you started the whole Rise thing and that you named the other story 'Fall of the Gemini', making it very logical for N_B to name this one 'Rise of the Gemini', I think I can blame you!".
Darn! :P
Anyway, a good start, N_B! For some happy time, I thought the girl of angelic beauty had punched Shard. That'd have made it hilarious. Unfortunately, she wasn't training with them (or was mad).
Also, you might want to consider making smaller paragraphs. If anything, they won't be able to fit the 2000 character limit! :P