76.232.200.172 wrote:
Hey guys! I extended that one short story I wrote about the elephanter three year old and made it its own Additional Manuscript. I've titled it "A Series of Questions by One Inquisitive Young Blubberstein."Â l think that clicking on the title I posted will magically whisk you away to the wiki page. :P I only posted it here on the wiki (not the MBs) and I'd be grateful if you gave me some feedback. Positive feedback is appreciated, and negative feedback is even more appreciated. :D After reading it, tell me if you think I should post the updated version on the LMBs. :P
Hey guys! I extended that one short story I wrote about the elephanter three year old and made it its own Additional Manuscript. I've titled it "A Series of Questions by One Inquisitive Young Blubberstein."Â l think that clicking on the title I posted will magically whisk you away to the wiki page. :P I only posted it here on the wiki (not the MBs) and I'd be grateful if you gave me some feedback. Positive feedback is appreciated, and negative feedback is even more appreciated. :D After reading it, tell me if you think I should post the updated version on the LMBs. :P
I liked it! I think you should definitely try and post ot to the MBs, although it may not be accepted because of the references to death. I personally appreciated that, though, because it helps show how bad for everyone TheDude's rule was.