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Hmm. This final part is leaving me somewhat confused.
First of all, it's unclear what happens here: "The doors slid open to a crossway that Aiden was about to exit to when a dark shape with garnet hair slammed into him and bounced off, into the elevator, leaving Aiden doubled over". What's that dark shape and where did it come from? You don't explain.
Furthermore, where were Luke and Juiliet? Why were they separated from the others? What were they doing? What caused the fight to start? Was it a trap or did the two of them do something that alerted everyone?
Other than that, interesting and hecc!