Interesting. I like it.
Words Interval. WORDS words Wordity wordity words. some dots ............. and some more dots ......... and some words flare banana squirrel apple these were some words did you see the words? did you liek the words? here are some more dots ........... octocat adventures. That should be enough.
It's a shame about Burnie. There was potential in that character we might never see come to fruition. Might.
Janitoring?! Whaaa?
Menaya Rhyffed (not Ryffyd, though that just might be Perry getting it wrong) and Steffan Kull! :P
After all this time distancing myself from the LMB set of mind, it feels weird seeing the use of the word "smash".
I really liked the first act of this manuscript. I enjoyed all the catching up and the references to previous stories. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.