I think something is missing there just before the punchline.
The amount of (grounded) Red Mythrans dying in this story shocks the LCCC. Loved the reference to your and Blaze's childhood. I'd like to say it was great, but its state of incompletion is stopping me. Still... I wonder what kind of process these stories go through to be made.
Also, I like how A Hallowe'en Carol has created this whole format of stories.
Even if you don't celebrate Hallowe'en, HAPPY HALLOWE'EN CANDY HARVEST everyone! Remember to give them all candies to your lord and master thedude. He's going to be very mad if you don't!