Okay, with Drumr's chapter's end replaced with my placeholder one until further notice. I now call my fellow Knights to decide who's going to continue the story.
According to our not strictly followed but not to be forsaken order:
Ninjago_Builders
(m5)
talmid
fffffplayer1
(Gollymolly)
Strider
Jonna
Haroldosaur
- Drumr
James and Jonna should go next. I don't know if they've got the time, inspiration and mood to write SA chapters, but considering the point of the story we've reached (what with Perry, Carson and Jonna there), I think their writing would be optimal.
Whoever ends up writing the next chapter(s), though, I promise to help with the Tain-Moira parts. And that is a threat.
There are many things which I must discuss before I write. Mostly with Wiz, since most of his characters are here, and Drumr has done very well in explaining his character.Â
1: being what is his reasoning, if any, for including Carson. As cool as it is, (Which rates 7/10 on my File:Cool.pngScale of CoolioFile:Cool.png ) I don't understand the point, if there is one. :PÂ
2: Perry. Time has passed, and that might have affected... STUFF.
3: Tain, Moria, whom I always accidentally read as Moria ... As in the Mines of Moria, andÂ
4: What did we agree on concerning the Thingguys!?! Â EDIT:Â Did research. All we ever agreed on was that "we'd use Thingguys Duality principle." AKA, Thingguy split himself. Author Thingguy says in GD2, that the split was the effect of trying to handle the power of the Grammer Sword when trying to stop Brocktree from taking Sharpie's life and the Sword. Â But I'm not sure that's viable. . .? I supose it is.
That means, one Thingguy was captured, the other was free. The Thingguys couldn't have been split due to thedude's tortures because then how could one thingguy could have met Sacul at the same time the other met Talmid???
I say we do what Author Thingguy originally suggested, if it is still possible, as mentioned above. However, this means that there is no evil Thingguys, unless TAlmid-Thingguy got messed with or microchipped before he 'escaped' with Talmid. Which would make sense, since otherwise, their escape makes practically NO sense. :P (If you want a sensible Jailbreak, look at To Defy Doom! .... Oh who am I kidding. :P ) Â So that could make a ThingguyVSThingguy showdown, or even Talmid-Thingguy the poisoner!!! :OÂ
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1: Looking back to your jammer-posts on the subject, I found you said that Carson just didn't have any reason to be there. But he didn't have any particular reason to be elsewhere either. And I figured that they couldn't just let him go his way, because he knew too much and he might have decided to rat everyone to the authorities. That's why I think someone and most probabbly Tain would have dragged him along to keep watch on him. We can edit that out, but I thought it was fun and did it.
2: You are talking about Exuberance here?
3: More about that later in the chats.
4: Thingguy had intended that the Thingguys are reunited while finding Jonna. Since that opportunity is lost and since we have yet to exploit the situation of two Thingguys the best way we can, I think we should delay that for the ending of the book. I think that thedude let Thingguy and Talmid go, so that they would lead them to other Knights and allies. That's what happens in my chapter where they let the Knights go, but attack the ones they leave behind. Whether he is microchipped or not I'm not sure, but I can see Talmid-Thingguy getting confused by some emerging memories and still admitting to Talmid that he's the impostor by the end of the story.
Edit: Also, about the poisoning. We need to decide what we do with Marty and Joe, as they could be poisoners, too.