The Adventures of the Peculiar Enchanter: The Beginning - Revision history

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Small edit I wanted to do for a while and just remembered about

2021-11-16T19:46:05Z

Small edit I wanted to do for a while and just remembered about

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	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âOh? Unfinished business? What is this about?â Azira asked, but she did not get an answer.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âOh? Unfinished business? What is this about?â Azira asked, but she did not get an answer.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âIâll see you again, Wiz Ardonâ, Elemiere then came closer so as only Wiz would hear her next words. âBy the way, that just now was ~~not my true name~~. And ~~donât~~ you dare ask Geidrich for ~~itâ~~.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âIâll see you again, Wiz Ardonâ, Elemiere then came closer so as only Wiz would hear her next words. âBy the way, that just now was but a mere nickname. And I trust you won't dare to ask Geidrich for the real thingâ.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">And so the two of them parted too soon for Wizâs taste. And yet he was still feeling blissful and light-headed long after so that he didnât notice heâd forgotten his precious sunglasses until much later.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">And so the two of them parted too soon for Wizâs taste. And yet he was still feeling blissful and light-headed long after so that he didnât notice heâd forgotten his precious sunglasses until much later.</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 11:25, 15 June 2020

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	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âIf you instruct me with that stern tone, Iâm sure to have bad dreams of grumpy old men later and then Iâll make the northern tower float like the old timesâ, Wiz teased seeing that his master was in the mood to joke just a bit.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âIf you instruct me with that stern tone, Iâm sure to have bad dreams of grumpy old men later and then Iâll make the northern tower float like the old timesâ, Wiz teased seeing that his master was in the mood to joke just a bit.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âWhoâre you calling ~~and~~ old man?â</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âWhoâre you calling an old man?â</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âThe one wearing clothes of last centuryâs fashionâ.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âThe one wearing clothes of last centuryâs fashionâ.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âThis joke doesnât even work if ~~we havenât changed centuries~~ long ~~enough for me to have been~~ born in ~~the last oneâ~~.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âThis joke doesnât even work if last century was so long ago I wasn't even born in itâ.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âJust goes to show had bad your fashion sense isâ.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âJust goes to show had bad your fashion sense isâ.</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 13:12, 12 June 2020

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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 17:16, 4 June 2020

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	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âBut to tell my friends who this girl who tried to dictate my diet first thing we met was, of courseâ.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âBut to tell my friends who this girl who tried to dictate my diet first thing we met was, of courseâ.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âYou cunning creature! And how would be in my interests? I wonât have you tarnish my reputation soâ.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âYou cunning creature! And how would that be in my interests? I wonât have you tarnish my reputation soâ.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âBut if you do tell me, I wonât have to come after you to learn. Do you want me bothering you again?â</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âBut if you do tell me, I wonât have to come after you to learn. Do you want me bothering you again?â</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 16:30, 29 May 2020

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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 22:42, 21 May 2020

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	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âTheyâre with meâ, the magician said simply.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">âTheyâre with meâ, the magician said simply.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">The questioning ~~asked~~ seemed to fight an urge to state that that was obvious since he momentarily rolled his eyes, but said no more. Beyond the status wizards whoâd not been cast away by the high society enjoyed, it was common knowledge that angering a wizard leads to no good, so there was not much more the guards could do. Thus they were let through.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">The questioning guard seemed to fight an urge to state that that was obvious since he momentarily rolled his eyes, but said no more. Beyond the status wizards whoâd not been cast away by the high society enjoyed, it was common knowledge that angering a wizard leads to no good, so there was not much more the guards could do. Thus they were let through.</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">They were near their destination now and as a result both Wiz and his mother tensed up. On the one hand, the anxiety that he might not actually be taken in by Geidrich was finally starting to kick in. On the other, the sooner their journey was over, the sooner Wiz would have to say goodbye to his mother possibly and they didnât know how quickly that would happen after they entered Geidrichâs house. They steeled their nerves, however, and kept on going.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm" lang="en-GB">They were near their destination now and as a result both Wiz and his mother tensed up. On the one hand, the anxiety that he might not actually be taken in by Geidrich was finally starting to kick in. On the other, the sooner their journey was over, the sooner Wiz would have to say goodbye to his mother possibly and they didnât know how quickly that would happen after they entered Geidrichâs house. They steeled their nerves, however, and kept on going.</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 20:44, 21 May 2020

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	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">As they made for the door, Wiz gave a last look towards the burning building. A lot of their neighbours had gathered, too, some of them helping extinguish the flames, others watching from the cover of one houseâs porch or anotherâs. Garvus opened the door and ushered him in. Just then right before he entered the house, he noticed Frau Weidemann, who lived next door, staring at him with an appalled expression. What was the meaning of that?</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">As they made for the door, Wiz gave a last look towards the burning building. A lot of their neighbours had gathered, too, some of them helping extinguish the flames, others watching from the cover of one houseâs porch or anotherâs. Garvus opened the door and ushered him in. Just then right before he entered the house, he noticed Frau Weidemann, who lived next door, staring at him with an appalled expression. What was the meaning of that?</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">Once inside, in Wizâs bedroom, there were a few moments of silence in consideration before ~~the children~~ spoke up, âHey, what just happened? Can you doâ¦ magic?â</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">Once inside, in Wizâs bedroom, there were a few moments of silence in consideration before either of them spoke up, âHey, what just happened? Can you doâ¦ magic?â</p>

	<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">Wiz paused for an instant thinking about it,âI donât know how else to explain it. I didnât think I was doing it âI didnât even know I ''could ''do any of thisâ, but maybe I somehow unconsciously controlled the rainâ¦ and the lightning. Iâve read in a book that this can happen to magiciansâ.</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal" lang="en-GB">Wiz paused for an instant thinking about it,âI donât know how else to explain it. I didnât think I was doing it âI didnât even know I ''could ''do any of thisâ, but maybe I somehow unconsciously controlled the rainâ¦ and the lightning. Iâve read in a book that this can happen to magiciansâ.</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter at 22:35, 17 May 2020

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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Here comes the long-awaited revision of this story. It's quite long, has a lot going on, so I'd love detailed feedback to go with it, if you can spare it.

2020-05-17T22:27:32Z

Here comes the long-awaited revision of this story. It's quite long, has a lot going on, so I'd love detailed feedback to go with it, if you can spare it.

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