Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Created page with "Emperor Palpatine's voice: Let the fizzy soda pop flow through you! :P I thought you intended Perry to conjure a lot of green spheres. Did you change your mind after all? ..."

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Created page with "Emperor Palpatine's voice: Let the fizzy soda pop flow through you! :P I thought you intended Perry to conjure a lot of green spheres. Did you change your mind after all? ..."

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Emperor Palpatine's voice: Let the fizzy soda pop flow through you! :P

I thought you intended Perry to conjure a lot of green spheres. Did you change your mind after all?

Finally, I think you need a connecting paragraph or sentence between chapter 7's two parts, because the transition seems a little abrupt. Something along the lines of "After a lot of magical training, these things happened" or "Steffan continued tutoring Peragrine for the duration of an Eye of the Tiger cut" :P

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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Created page with "Emperor Palpatine's voice: Let the fizzy soda pop flow through you! :P I thought you intended Perry to conjure a lot of green spheres. Did you change your mind after all? ..."