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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Adding categories

2017-04-06T13:19:09Z

Adding categories

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	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">The stranger walked out of the room. Facing the idea of the alternative, Nuncius finally decided to trust the man and followed him. He was not smashed, yet. Why would the man free him, if he was not on his side. Could it be some sort of trick? Even if it was, it couldn't land him on a predicament worse than if he remained in there. And so the Messenger, risen and fallen, followed the stranger. . .</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">The stranger walked out of the room. Facing the idea of the alternative, Nuncius finally decided to trust the man and followed him. He was not smashed, yet. Why would the man free him, if he was not on his side. Could it be some sort of trick? Even if it was, it couldn't land him on a predicament worse than if he remained in there. And so the Messenger, risen and fallen, followed the stranger. . .</p>
	[[Category:The Additional Manuscripts]]		[[Category:The Additional Manuscripts]]
			[[Category:Stories by fffffplayer1]]

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2017-01-07T23:10:29Z

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	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''One of the Paradox Rogues appeared in the cave's archway. He was wearing only half the Space Marauder's equipment and only holding a Rank 3 Blaster for a weapon. For a few moments, the Rogue looked at the path and the plain below them to see if there was anyone fleeing. Nuncius's heart pounded very fast as he wished the Rogue would just go back in the cave. Then, he turned his head towards them and there was an expression of triumph on his eyes. Then, Beef's sword hit him. The Paradox Renegade screamed and a blast was released from his weapon towards a random direction before he was smashed.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''One of the Paradox Rogues appeared in the cave's archway. He was wearing only half the Space Marauder's equipment and only holding a Rank 3 Blaster for a weapon. For a few moments, the Rogue looked at the path and the plain below them to see if there was anyone fleeing. Nuncius's heart pounded very fast as he wished the Rogue would just go back in the cave. Then, he turned his head towards them and there was an expression of triumph on his eyes. Then, Beef's sword hit him. The Paradox Renegade screamed and a blast was released from his weapon towards a random direction before he was smashed.''</p>

	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Nuncius sighed. Now, they would have to fight. The ~~smahed~~ Rogue's comrades would have certainly heard of the Rogue's scream and they would be coming. And if the five of them were there, there probably ~~weree~~ more nearby.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Nuncius sighed. Now, they would have to fight. The smashed Rogue's comrades would have certainly heard of the Rogue's scream and they would be coming. And if the five of them were there, there probably were more nearby.''</p>

	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Some clutter was heard and soon the three Shadow Knights appeared from the cave. The two minifigures, still on the same position, attacked them now they had the advantage of surprise. Sir Loin of Beef smashed one of them immediately and Nuncius injured another. His next hit, however, was blocked. He continued attacking, but he did not deliver more blows. He wasn't a particularly good swordfighter and offense wasn't his specialty. However, he wished to be over with the Knights, because he knew there was another Rogue around and he did not wish for him to reach them while they were still engaged in combat with the Knights. This would probably result in their smashing.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Some clutter was heard and soon the three Shadow Knights appeared from the cave. The two minifigures, still on the same position, attacked them now they had the advantage of surprise. Sir Loin of Beef smashed one of them immediately and Nuncius injured another. His next hit, however, was blocked. He continued attacking, but he did not deliver more blows. He wasn't a particularly good swordfighter and offense wasn't his specialty. However, he wished to be over with the Knights, because he knew there was another Rogue around and he did not wish for him to reach them while they were still engaged in combat with the Knights. This would probably result in their smashing.''</p>
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	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Halfway through the cave, they met the Rogue, who seemed to be fully equipped.. After an initial surprise on both sides, the Knight and the Messenger charged, while the Rogue raised his Wormholer. Nuncius heard the gun fire once and he saw its illuminating blast, but did not follow it with hid gaze. Instead, he covered the last distance between him and the Rogue and brought his sword up, cutting the Wormholer's saw in two pieces.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Halfway through the cave, they met the Rogue, who seemed to be fully equipped.. After an initial surprise on both sides, the Knight and the Messenger charged, while the Rogue raised his Wormholer. Nuncius heard the gun fire once and he saw its illuminating blast, but did not follow it with hid gaze. Instead, he covered the last distance between him and the Rogue and brought his sword up, cutting the Wormholer's saw in two pieces.''</p>

	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Deprived of his weapon, the Rogue was dazed for a moment. In that moment, Nuncius ~~realised~~ the absence of Beef on his left. He looked behind and saw he'd fallen on the ground, injured. ~~S eizing~~ the opportunity, the Rogue fled towards the inner parts of the cave. Remembering Sir Loin of Beef had said that the cave had fit ~~yhe~~ King, the KotOS and some soldiers almost five years ago, Nuncius had a suspicion of where the Rogue was running to. However, he did not make any move to chase him. There was no point in it since he would never catch him, while Beef had been hurt.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Deprived of his weapon, the Rogue was dazed for a moment. In that moment, Nuncius realized the absence of Beef on his left. He looked behind and saw he'd fallen on the ground, injured. Seizing the opportunity, the Rogue fled towards the inner parts of the cave. Remembering Sir Loin of Beef had said that the cave had fit the King, the KotOS and some soldiers almost five years ago, Nuncius had a suspicion of where the Rogue was running to. However, he did not make any move to chase him. There was no point in it since he would never catch him, while Beef had been hurt.''</p>

	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Instead of that, he lifted Beef in his arms and began to run carrying him. Perhaps, he would manage to get away before the Rogue brought reinforcements.''</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''Instead of that, he lifted Beef in his arms and began to run carrying him. Perhaps, he would manage to get away before the Rogue brought reinforcements.''</p>

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Minor.

2017-01-07T12:22:44Z

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	Northern Morcia\|characters = Nuncius		Northern Morcia\|characters = Nuncius
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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Small infobox changes.

2017-01-04T17:27:10Z

Small infobox changes.

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	{{Story_Infobox_Augmented\|title1 = Rise of the Messenger\|posted_on = 4/1/2017\|author = fffffplayer1\|previous_suggested_story = The Adventures of the Peculiar Enchanter: A History Lesson\|next_suggested_story = TBD\|chronologically_previous_story ~~= The Adventures of the Peculiar Enchanter: Inside the Mirror Halls\|chronologically_next_story~~ = To Return Home: Act 2: ~~The Blockade~~\|series = Messengers And Rogues\|previous = ---\|next = The Legend of Rogue Square\|type_of_story = Short Story (Additional Manuscript)\|canon_status = Full Canon\|date = 5 Yt\|location(s) = *Elepharia		{{Story_Infobox_Augmented\|title1 = Rise of the Messenger\|posted_on = 4/1/2017\|author = fffffplayer1\|previous_suggested_story = The Adventures of the Peculiar Enchanter: A History Lesson\|next_suggested_story = TBD\|chronologically_previous_story = To Return Home: Act 5: Silverstine Keep\|chronologically_next_story = thedude doesn't like snow\|series = Messengers And Rogues\|previous = ---\|next = The Legend of Rogue Square\|type_of_story = Short Story (Additional Manuscript)\|canon_status = Full Canon\|date = 5 Yt\|location(s) = *Elepharia
	Northern Morcia\|characters = Nuncius		Northern Morcia\|characters = Nuncius
	*Sir Loin of Beef		*Sir Loin of Beef

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Minor changes.

2017-01-04T17:21:13Z

Minor changes.

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			*Sir Loin of Beef
			*Several Commanders
			*Many Paradox Rogues}}
	<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">Nuncius was running. Yes, he was running as fast as his legs could take him. Yet, he was unfamiliar with the place he was running. He had never been in a jungle before. Every now and then, he would trip over vines or big leaves or something else. However, he never decelarated and continued his way, getting up as fast as he could. Furthermore, he was in constant fear of all the dangers he'd heard that creeped in rainforests like these: snakes, lions, tigers, apes and really so much more. Oh no! He definitely preferred the forests of his land. They sure weren't as unfriendly as these jungles, albeit they could get somewhat darker.</p>		<p align="LEFT" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">Nuncius was running. Yes, he was running as fast as his legs could take him. Yet, he was unfamiliar with the place he was running. He had never been in a jungle before. Every now and then, he would trip over vines or big leaves or something else. However, he never decelarated and continued his way, getting up as fast as he could. Furthermore, he was in constant fear of all the dangers he'd heard that creeped in rainforests like these: snakes, lions, tigers, apes and really so much more. Oh no! He definitely preferred the forests of his land. They sure weren't as unfriendly as these jungles, albeit they could get somewhat darker.</p>

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	<p ~~align="CENTER" lang="en-US"~~ style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~*---*~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2" lang="en-US" align="CENTER"><nowiki>~~~*---*~~~</nowiki></p>

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	<p align="CENTER" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~*---*~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~''</p>		<p align="CENTER" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">''<nowiki>~~~*---*~~~</nowiki>''</p>

	<p align="CENTER" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2"><br /></p>		<p align="CENTER" lang="en-US" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2"><br /></p>
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	<p ~~align="CENTER" lang="en-US"~~ style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2">~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~*---*~~[[User:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter]] ([[User talk:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter\|talk]])~~</p>		<p style="margin-bottom: 0cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; widows: 2; orphans: 2" lang="en-US" align="CENTER"><nowiki>~~~*---*~~~</nowiki></p>

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Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: As much as it pains me to ruin that 100...

2017-01-04T17:11:22Z

As much as it pains me to ruin that 100...

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