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		<title>Jonna Friesian: Created page with &quot;&lt;div class=&quot;quote&quot;&gt;Haroldosaur wrote:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class=&quot;quote&quot;&gt;Jonna Friesian wrote:&lt;br /&gt;About time I finished this. :P I few things I&#039;d like to say:  The hair: Honestly this ...&quot;</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;&amp;lt;div class=&amp;quot;quote&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Haroldosaur wrote:&amp;lt;br /&amp;gt;&amp;lt;div class=&amp;quot;quote&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Jonna Friesian wrote:&amp;lt;br /&amp;gt;About time I finished this. :P I few things I&amp;#039;d like to say:  The hair: Honestly this ...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;lt;div class=&amp;quot;quote&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Haroldosaur wrote:&amp;lt;br /&amp;gt;&amp;lt;div class=&amp;quot;quote&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Jonna Friesian wrote:&amp;lt;br /&amp;gt;About time I finished this. :P I few things I&amp;#039;d like to say:&lt;br /&gt;
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The hair: Honestly this came out much better than I thought it would. :P I know it&amp;#039;s not too good but this is as close as it&amp;#039;s going to get. :P&lt;br /&gt;
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The tear in the far sleeve: I wasn&amp;#039;t sure whether the shirt would show through there, since it&amp;#039;s described as a short sleeve shirt in Foes and Heirs, and considering the way the jacket was bunching up, I didn&amp;#039;t think it would. If I made the wrong call let me know and I&amp;#039;ll try to go back and change it. :P&lt;br /&gt;
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I think that&amp;#039;s it. Any feedback?[[File:Loden_Adalwin-by_Haroldosaur-Colored_by_Jonna.jpg|thumb|left|Literally over half of the color-checking was for the hair. O_o]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/div&amp;gt;YAY&lt;br /&gt;
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SO MUCH YAY&lt;br /&gt;
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The tear in the sleeve is good, it is indeed a short shirt so i was envisioning skin there. The hair is fine, it&amp;#039;s great.&lt;br /&gt;
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Um... that&amp;#039;s all your concerns addressed, I think? Yay!&lt;br /&gt;
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Awesome! Glad you liked it!&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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