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Stirling Silverstine: /* Chapter 4: A Walk Through Grey */

2019-03-10T20:52:10Z

Chapter 4: A Walk Through Grey

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	"Wait! The moat is filled with-"		"Wait! The moat is filled with-"

	"Geronimooo!" screamed the doctor. ~~Unfortunate~~, the sharks had been alerted to this fashion after Kalaren and the other shinobi had, so they were all too prepared to gobble the doctor as he came down. ~~Doubly unfortunate~~, for the sharks, Doctor Jellyfish had his blaster, and an empty missile cartridge, which he ~~used to shoot the waiting sharks~~, causing them to scatter.		"Geronimooo!" screamed the doctor. Unfortunatly, the sharks had been alerted to this fashion after Kalaren and the other shinobi had, so they were all too prepared to gobble the doctor as he came down. However, unfortunately for the sharks, Doctor Jellyfish had his blaster which he used to shoot the waiting sharks, and an empty missile cartridge which he threw at them for good measure, causing them to scatter.

	A few minutes later showed the odd duo safely scampering into the nearby woods.		A few minutes later showed the odd duo safely scampering into the nearby woods.
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	"Anyway, we continued onto another village where we picked up another scientist. He and Lord Vladek talked while I and the other scientist, continued talking, though less energetically. The other scientist had a history of taking some jobs that people generally weren't sure about. Anyway, after that we rode to his fort, where we passed by the prison cell and went down a passageway near the end. You saw it when we were escaping. We found you strapped to the table, where we were given instructions to slowly take DNA samples from you. Lord Vladek wanted this to be completely secret. Lord Vladek also explained what happened to you, due to questions from the last scientist. He said he wanted to get a clone of you that would be absolutely loyal to him, and only to him. He had some other assets he would mix in with the clone as well. I have a few ideas of what those assets were. I think he could have not only taken the DNA of a separate prisoner, but could have extracted the knowledge of a prisoner as well. We didn't have time to fulfill his request to do that to you."		"Anyway, we continued onto another village where we picked up another scientist. He and Lord Vladek talked while I and the other scientist, continued talking, though less energetically. The other scientist had a history of taking some jobs that people generally weren't sure about. Anyway, after that we rode to his fort, where we passed by the prison cell and went down a passageway near the end. You saw it when we were escaping. We found you strapped to the table, where we were given instructions to slowly take DNA samples from you. Lord Vladek wanted this to be completely secret. Lord Vladek also explained what happened to you, due to questions from the last scientist. He said he wanted to get a clone of you that would be absolutely loyal to him, and only to him. He had some other assets he would mix in with the clone as well. I have a few ideas of what those assets were. I think he could have not only taken the DNA of a separate prisoner, but could have extracted the knowledge of a prisoner as well. We didn't have time to fulfill his request to do that to you."

	Kalaren thought about this new-found information for awhile during which they continued walking, Jellyfish waited for a response and the forest ~~reamined~~ dead.		Kalaren thought about this new-found information for awhile during which they continued walking, Jellyfish waited for a response and the forest remained dead.

	Eventually Kalaren said, "Who is thedude?"		Eventually Kalaren said, "Who is thedude?"

Stirling Silverstine: /* Epilouge */ Changed the city / location to fit with continuity. Also because this story shall receive a sequal at some point in the future, and the location is key. -James&Kal

2019-03-10T20:34:22Z

Epilouge: Changed the city / location to fit with continuity. Also because this story shall receive a sequal at some point in the future, and the location is key. -James&Kal

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	For the first few weeks of their stay, the other residents resented them for bringing trouble, but slowly began to trust and forgive Kalaren and Jellyfish. For the next month there was the occasional raid against the town, varying in size from squad to twenty troops. The clone never arrived. But the rebels were able to defend and prepare well enough and managed to survive. But at the end of the month, they stopped coming. No one worried about 'why', only too glad to be rid of them. They held a celebration feast for the occasion. After a long period of time the rebels decided they could tell Kalaren and Jellyfish where the base was located.		For the first few weeks of their stay, the other residents resented them for bringing trouble, but slowly began to trust and forgive Kalaren and Jellyfish. For the next month there was the occasional raid against the town, varying in size from squad to twenty troops. The clone never arrived. But the rebels were able to defend and prepare well enough and managed to survive. But at the end of the month, they stopped coming. No one worried about 'why', only too glad to be rid of them. They held a celebration feast for the occasion. After a long period of time the rebels decided they could tell Kalaren and Jellyfish where the base was located.

	"We are in the ~~Ruins~~ of ~~Margothor~~." Matheeas stated to them.		"We are in the City of Aragarth." Matheeas stated to them.

	"~~Margothor~~?!~~? Wasn't this place once a-~~" Jellyfish almost yelled.		"Aragarth... What sort of a name is that?!" Jellyfish almost yelled.

	"Yes, ~~it was~~. The founders of the rebellion were on the run and knew that the ruins here would be a ~~grear~~ strategical position, and were right! They did run into a band of dark dwarves though. They managed to drive them out."		"Yes, well, we're not sure. The founders of the rebellion were on the run and knew that the ruins here would be a great strategical position, and were right! They did run into a band of dark dwarves though. They managed to drive them out."

	The enchanter that was keeping them from going crazy did eventually take on an apprentice, and the rebellion survived, and thrived.<blockquote>'''<u>The End.</u>'''</blockquote>[[Category:Stories]]		The enchanter that was keeping them from going crazy did eventually take on an apprentice, and the rebellion survived, and thrived.<blockquote>'''<u>The End.</u>'''</blockquote>[[Category:Stories]]
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	[[Category:Stories by RedFireDog6]]		[[Category:Stories by RedFireDog6]]

Stirling Silverstine: /* ----- */ Fixed errant formatting

2019-01-21T02:51:58Z

-----: Fixed errant formatting

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	He also became aware that he was strapped to a chair. Finding a window to his left, he was able to look out it's heavily tinted portal, and saw multi-colored lights streaking along. Then he fell back into slumber.		He also became aware that he was strapped to a chair. Finding a window to his left, he was able to look out it's heavily tinted portal, and saw multi-colored lights streaking along. Then he fell back into slumber.

	~~===~~ ----- ~~===~~		<nowiki>-----</nowiki>

	The next time he awoke, he was strapped to a table, in a dark room. There were four figures in the room. One of them was the mystery man. He was leaning in the corner. The others could only be described as modern doctors, or perhaps scientists.		The next time he awoke, he was strapped to a table, in a dark room. There were four figures in the room. One of them was the mystery man. He was leaning in the corner. The others could only be described as modern doctors, or perhaps scientists.

Stirling Silverstine: Completed Story.

2019-01-21T02:51:03Z

Completed Story.

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Stirling Silverstine: Happy US National Cheese-Lovers, Penguins, and DJ's Day. Ducks can fly.

2019-01-21T02:12:36Z

Happy US National Cheese-Lovers, Penguins, and DJ's Day. Ducks can fly.

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Stirling Silverstine: /* Chapter 1: Tragic Beginnings. */ Added Art from the original Gallery Posting.

2019-01-19T03:49:39Z

Chapter 1: Tragic Beginnings.: Added Art from the original Gallery Posting.

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	As he neared it, he realized it was anything but a barbecue fire.		As he neared it, he realized it was anything but a barbecue fire.
	Rather, a fire from torches and siege weaponry.		Rather, a fire from torches and siege weaponry.
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	It was a barbarian raiding party from the prehistoric ages. This was not		It was a barbarian raiding party from the prehistoric ages. This was not
	<nowiki> </nowiki>the first time this week that barbarians had appeared in downtown, but		<nowiki> </nowiki>the first time this week that barbarians had appeared in downtown, but
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	honorary war-cry, which Kalaren recognized from the news reports.		honorary war-cry, which Kalaren recognized from the news reports.

	"HOOOOGA!"		"HOOOOGA!"

	As distracting as the sight of a kilted barbarian with a laser rifle and		As distracting as the sight of a kilted barbarian with a laser rifle and
	<nowiki> </nowiki>space miner's helmet yelling 'Hooga' was, Kalaren noticed something		<nowiki> </nowiki>space miner's helmet yelling 'Hooga' was, Kalaren noticed something
	else.		else.
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	A quite more civilized character with a black cloak and sword, in		A quite more civilized character with a black cloak and sword, in
	matching red and black armor. He walked around the general chaos, but		matching red and black armor. He walked around the general chaos, but
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	there was nothing he could do about it...		there was nothing he could do about it...

	To be continued.		To be continued. "SOONâ¢"!

			-Kalaren Grimfire
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	[[Category:Stories by RedFireDog6]]		[[Category:Stories by RedFireDog6]]

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: Adding categories

2017-04-15T13:08:49Z

Adding categories

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	To be continued.		To be continued.
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			[[Category:The Additional Manuscripts]]
			[[Category:Stories by RedFireDog6]]

Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter: We hadn't had one of these.

2017-04-15T13:06:12Z

We hadn't had one of these.

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[[File:Cal Kover.jpg|centre|thumb|400x400px]]

=== Chapter 1: Tragic Beginnings. ===
Kalaren strolled to the shiny new playground.

One week ago, time seemed to have disappeared. Time itself had no restraints, causing histories to repeat itself, futures to become past, presents to not exist.
Everyone has their own sense of time now. "5 seconds for me is something
<nowiki> </nowiki>entirely different for someone else." His life had been changed, and
it had been some time since he had been able to relax. However, today
was his 13th birthday, according to himself, and he had asked permission
<nowiki> </nowiki>to take a walk to the new playground. His sisters, Sarah and Lucille,
would join him after they finished cleaning dishes.

The only thing that marred his relaxation was that his father was ill
with a sickness called "Maelstrom Infection". Some sort of space
disease that originated from far away. It was interfering with his
father's work as Ankoria's foremost Swordsmith. The doctors would not
tell much to Kal or his sisters. The doctors would spend a lot of time
with their parents...

But he was not supposed to be worrying about that now. Mother had said
to enjoy himself.

As he rounded the corner of some trees, he saw smoke.

"A barbecue!" he said, pleased. He hurried to it.

As he neared it, he realized it was anything but a barbecue fire.
Rather, a fire from torches and siege weaponry.

It was a barbarian raiding party from the prehistoric ages. This was not
<nowiki> </nowiki>the first time this week that barbarians had appeared in downtown, but
this time... they had space-age weaponry as well. And they knew just
enough to be as maximally dangerous as possible.

One of them swung up onto the top of some monkey bars, and let loose a
honorary war-cry, which Kalaren recognized from the news reports.

"HOOOOGA!"

As distracting as the sight of a kilted barbarian with a laser rifle and
<nowiki> </nowiki>space miner's helmet yelling 'Hooga' was, Kalaren noticed something
else.

A quite more civilized character with a black cloak and sword, in
matching red and black armor. He walked around the general chaos, but
Kalaren noticed how the barbarians made way for him. They did not look
at him, but they went out of their way to not interrupt his passage
to...The general direction of ...

His house!

He ran after the cloaked man, hardly noticing the barbarians as they
attempted to detain him with fist and knife. Kalaren's heart suddenly
felt very cold and achy. Something terrible was about to happen. He knew
<nowiki> </nowiki>it for a certainty. Even as he ran as fast as he could, the dour man
got further and further out of reach, even though he went no faster than
<nowiki> </nowiki>a businesslike stride, till he was out of view. Kalaren realized that
his sense of time was getting slower than the mysterious man's, and
there was nothing he could do about it...

To be continued.